PART 22 (ITS NOT THE LAST PART.. UMM you can say i extended this on demand.. )

MK:- yes she is .. she is my …
MK stopped abruptly and looked away in frustration.. at that very moment he got call.. from Adi.. He looked at an stunned Mr Mehra and answered the call..

MK:- yes adi…

Adi:- MK, where are you ???

MK:- Am, at SIR’s place … why what happened ???

Adi:- MK do come to us as soon as you can… we are here to rescue Geet…

MK(shouted ):- what ??? are you guys mad ??? How can you go there without talking with me ???

Adi:- well that was sam’s decision and ARYANS agreed to that so we came here..

MK:- Freak !! you guys are out of your minds…

Adi:- Nothing will change that now MK…Now stop cursing us and reach here we are abt to enter there..

MK:- you got the address… ???

Adi(smirked):- yeah we trapped the location of the call.. Goons are such idiots they didn’t think that we could locate them easily with mobile nums .. and it is xyz building …

MK:- ok just wait for me .. am coming there…

He cut the call the call and still looked frustrated first sir wasn’t agreeing and now these guys … uff!! MK looked at Mr mehra and turned towards the door ..

Mr Mehra:- you like that girl ??? isn’t it ???

MK:- No… I love her … and am gonna save her with or without your instructions … He uttered with anger and went away leaving behind an amused and smiling mehra… .

Shekher:- ok guys till MK reaches here.. lets make a move and free her off from those ropes at least ..

ARYANS were looking through a window where Geet was kept tied with ropes.. her face told them that she was completely scared and weeping…

Adi(said out of pity):- this girl needs to be treated well…

Sam:- No time to waste adi.. lets move in..

Adi:- yeah ..

They sneaked inn, through the window and Geet looked at them in shock and then was relaxed seeing them .. but her teary eyes kept searching the one who should have come to her rescue .. ARYANS sensed the unspoken words of her.. and looked down..

Nikhil:- He didn’t come …

Shekher(immediately hit his foot):- He means ,ehh !! He is outside…

Geet knew they were hiding something …but nodded as she was still in danger zone ..

Geet:- They are insane ppl… They will kill shweta and uncle ,I heard they talked abt that ..

Rahul:- Don’t worry.. we are not handing them over to those ppl…

She was freed from her ropes now and all moved to get out from there … but they got to know, all were surrounded by goons .. and their guns…ARYANS ,immediately made a circle around Geet in order to protect her from them..

Man:- so he sent his mates to save her !! where is he ???

Adi:- what’s his need, if we are here … !!!

Man:- Means he doesn’t care for her ??? so sad sweetheart he is a coward to save you.. instead he sent these guys ,who are good for nothing …

Sam:- once, you were also in our group Rishi…

Man(Rishi):- Huhhh !! yeah ,where it was always MK to decide and we, like a puppet followed his orders.. Now am free to follow my own ways..

Yash:- you are wrong .. you are still a puppet to these ppl’s hands ..at least we are better than you, as we can voice our POV’s in front of Sir and MK, but you … you might drink glass of water even taking their permissions …

Sam laughed and next second he was knocked out as Rishi had hit him on his nose.. Geet got scared seeing the violence was getting started .. which she always had hated ..

Soon ARYANS got trapped as Rishi and his gang were huge in num compared to ARYANS and were sitting on floor while Rishi dialed MK’s num…

Geet(whispered ):- where is he ??? plz tell me the truth … she was now getting scared for Maan…
All looked at each other and then,

Yash(spoke):- Actually, MK refused to help you out from here as Sam had an argument with him regarding you ..

Sam:- I was .. uhh !! just telling my POV .. He got angry so ..

Geet looked down somewhere feeling hurt,

Adi:- but we had informed him after reaching here .. He will soon be here…
They heard

Rishi:- what yaar MK..you sent your army without the head …

MK(got alerted ):- what do you mean???

Rishi:- come on yaar, they all got arrested by my men , you haven’t trained them enough…

MK:- what they ???

Rishi:- yes… and now I want you also here but with shweta and vishal… that too in next 20 mints else forget your ARYANS and your GEET ..

MK:- dare you harm them…

Rishi:- ops I got scared .Bring them then.. and all are free to go …

MK just disconnected the call… someone called him..and MK looked back in shock…

Shweta:- we are coming with you…

MK:- No..

Mr mehra:- MK let them…

MK:- no sir .. I can’t take risk with their lives …

Shweta:- and what abt Geet’s and your friend’s lives ??

MK:- I will manage …

MK didn’t wait for their ans and went away ..

Geet(ST):- He didn’t come to save me … he sent them or they came on their own.. no no,.. he must be busy with something else ,that’s why he might have sent all of them.. but will he bring shweta here ??? Her ST was loud enough to be heard by ARYANS …

Geet looked at adi unintentionally and saw all were staring at her with amused expressions ..

Geet:- Ermm.. sorry wo.. I was loud I guess..

Shekher:- He won’t be bringing shweta here… if he had to he would have done that already..

Geet:- Are you trying to say he won’t come to save us ..???

Adi:- well, we can save ourselves.. and he knows that ..but he might come to save you ..

Geet :- I don’t understand you guys .. you all are a MYSTERY for me..

yash:- The biggest mystery has yet to come …

Geet:- am getting scared ..you all came to save me and you got in trouble and now MK will also be in trouble …

Adi:- don’t worry for him, he has faced this kinda situation many times…

sam:- yeah.. He will deal himself..

precap:- Certainly last part


67 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Jeevana
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 14:48:24

    Caught in enemy’s den …lol
    poor Geet still confused with …will he be here or not…
    offcourse he will…MSK jo hai…
    same precap again …last part again …
    now i seriously doubt your precaps … 😉


  2. -gurtimaniac-
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:18:08

    Nice update
    Aryans try to run away from the kidnapper along
    with Geet
    But Rishi n his man surrounded them
    Geet is confused whether MK will come or not for
    their rescue
    Shweta know tht Geet had been kidnapped n is
    ready to come with MK but he refused her
    Waiting for Maan arrival at the kidnapper place n
    the fight sequence b/w Maan n Rishi


  3. gill123
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:20:54

    just loved it


  4. shabnam
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:22:32

    awesome update…
    Thanks for extra part…
    ARYANS aaye aur fas gaye…liked them…
    Geet self talk was amusing for ARYANS…entertainment for them at dat place…

    Loved the ARYANS confidence on MK…
    He will come to save her…poor confused Geet did’nt get it…


  5. adsshri
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:26:22

    Awesome Part
    geet is confused alot on seeing aryans and mk attitude


  6. jyothi09
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:43:07

    Lollll bechari geet is all confused confused 🙂 and i am loving ittttttt


  7. padma
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:43:16

    Rose..lovely part…
    waiting to see how mk will tackle the goons..n save geet n aryans


  8. maaniqra
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:51:29



  9. gayathri1451
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 15:55:27

    thanks for da treat dear, loved it


  10. Teju
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 16:03:13

    So there is going to be big fight.. Waiting for it..


  11. neethuraj
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 16:13:35

    nice update.


  12. soma
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 16:24:07

    so all r arrested………….but knwing mk also hw dat buddhu can do dis fault……usne soye hue sher ko agah diye…..abb bhuktega…………

    superb n beautiful update…

    loved it very much…

    thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also…

    eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt…

    continue soon plz…


  13. amber
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 16:29:59



  14. kathrina pheonix (dumas)
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 17:04:19

    awesome update loved it they all got captured hope maan can get them out with them getting hurt loved the update thanks for the pm


  15. divya
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 18:03:37

    nyc part…
    lets c wat will maan do now


  16. pixelflower620
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 19:12:49

    awesome update buddy
    aryans came to save her nd maan confessed his love 🙂 in front of thr chief
    do cont soon
    thnx fr d pm buddy 🙂


  17. maaniqra
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 19:25:35

    awesome update loved it they all got captured hope maan can get them out with them getting hurt loved the update


  18. trs1391
    Feb 11, 2013 @ 23:38:05



  19. Kiran nautiyal
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 04:48:20

    Geet is sad that Maan didn’t come to save her….her hopes crushed….
    there Maan himself admitted in front of mr.Mehra that he loves Geet but why mr. Mehra is smiling and ready to help him…..
    awesome update…

    thanx for pm….


  20. ravrash
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 06:31:00

    ARYANS believe MK like they believe God
    it was awesome


  21. ushankitvc
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 07:01:36

    awesum updt…so rishi trapped aryans too with geet….what will MK do???what will the aryans do????continue sooon….


  22. frankieluv
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 11:11:09



  23. tarun
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 15:33:08

    aweesome 🙂


  24. sweetysaran
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 16:09:49

    loved it..
    awesome update dear…
    waiting for the maan’s move…
    beautifully written…


  25. zariya
    Feb 12, 2013 @ 18:01:06

    yeh love confession cheif k nhi geet k samne karna tha duffer
    but nice update


  26. spvd
    Feb 13, 2013 @ 06:57:24

    part 22
    awesome dear………..
    Aryans have landed in trouble………..
    how will Maan save them all?
    cont soon dear……………..

    Deepa (spvd)


  27. RB Laraib
    Feb 13, 2013 @ 10:35:46

    awesome update
    so all get stuck and now mk is coming lets see what happens


  28. maanmaniac
    Feb 13, 2013 @ 11:48:48

    Oh God,even ARYANS got trappf????

    I hope jaldi se aaye and Sabko jaldi se chhudaye!!!

    Loved d update.



  29. Dhwani
    Feb 17, 2013 @ 12:18:08

    Awesome Update!!!!!!!!


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