(MG-SS) A COMPROMISED RELATION Chrs and PART 1

a CR

Characters
Geet- 23 years old. A typical Village girl, belonging to conservative family… Just got hold of her dreams and with lots of pressures putting on her parents … She went to pursue her dreams …came out from her village life towards the city of dreams Mumbai…

Maan- 25 years old, belonging to conservative family.. His parents died when he was kid..Just have an uncle in the name of elder. having High hopes for his own carrier… trying to complete his Business studies as well as doing a part time job in a reputed Detective agency… Got trained in that and now he is detective cum officer in this field… guiding and ordering his sub-ordinates…

yash- 25 years old … Geet’s brother…. he is maan’s assistant in that agency .. and a very good/ close friend of Maan…

Meera- 24 years old.. Maan’s cousin… she left her home back at village so to live her life as per her own wishes… and met yash- fell in love with him and got married to him…when in actual she was to marry Maan…

part 1

Geet entered her village premises after 3 years .. Back then she was just 20 years old when she left her village for study purpose… and then due to her parents wishes, she never went back at her home… even when her father died, her bro came there but her father took promise on his death bad from Yash to not to let Geet come here in this village ever… Her father knew, once she will be here she will not be allowed by the oldies of the village to go back.. and so for her happiness he made her part from her own family…
Geet had later came to know after like a year abt her father’s demise and since then she never talked or contacted her bro.. she kinda felt hatred and betrayed by her own brother…
and today, when her mother called her home urgently .. she rushed back to her home…scared for her mother’s well being…
entering her home… she recalled her childhood memories .. .with her bro…and her parents …. she smiled and moved ahead to see her mother.. who was faintly smiling at her …
Geet (ran and hugged her mom like a small child):- mama… I missed you so much… how are you??? (She scanned her mother) i was afraid … your voice was shaky and i thought you were in trouble …
a man ( in 40’s from behind said):- she is not .. But you are … going to be…
Geet (turned and looked at the man):- who are you??? and what do you mean by that ??? (Geet looked at her mom, who was looking down shedding tears)mama ????
Mr singh:- am Sarpanch of this village…
Geet(looked at him in confusion):- so???
Mr singh:- and i have taken a decision…
Geet:- what decision???
before Mr singh could say more… someone interrupted … gupta… father of Kiran…
gupta:- you will know soon.. he looked at both Geet and her mother in anger and went out .. followed by Mr singh… while Geet tried to ask her mother… who was helpless to speak a word even…
Geet tried to go from there but as soon as gupta and mr singh left, few men came in and dragged her to a room and then locked the door…

Geet’s screams went unnoticed even by her own mother as she was afraid they might harm her daughter more… so she just waited for the MAN to come and marry her daughter… as this was the only solution… to the prob Her son had put them both…
But she too was unaware of the thinking of those oldie ppl… of her village.. what they were planning .. what they were telling and then what they were to do in actual… with Geet…

After 3 hrs…

Maan reached his village….angry as to why his uncle was calling him …. there …. that too urgently… He entered his uncle’s home and his uncle smilingly went and hugged him…after some talks here and there Maan came to the point…
Maan:- what uncle ??? why you called me here????
Gupta:- Maan bete.. you know (he looked won ashamed to say the thing looking into his eyes) Meera.. was to marry you.. but she ran away and married someone else… and now its time to do the same with that boy’s family… His sister is here… we have trapped her here…
Maan (looked at him shocked) :- you ??? what???
Gupta: yes … and now … you are going to marry her…
Maan:- what non-sense, why should I marry her??? and that’s not right… okhh… Maan tried to argue…
Gupta(ST):- i knew this nut case… should i tell him my other plans, of after getting married he shall leave the girl and she will then be taking care of by my men.. should I tell this now ?? i think no… Let him get agreed to this marriage first …
Gupta:- So yo are sure, you aren’t going to marry her ???
Maan (firmly):- yes…
Gupta:-Fine then… I will just kill her then…
Maan(looked at his uncle in shock.. who left after announcing that) :- What ??? no.. uncle wait… (he came in front of the closed door, where few men were standing.. guarding) How can you do that ??? what’s her mistake in that ??? come on uncle…
Gupta:- as far as you don’t agree to my words then am not going to leave her alive…
the men opened the door and Gupta came in, Maan thought to pull out his gun from under his jacket but then none knew that he was an agent .. so retrieved back.. and thought of the possible ways to save that innocent girl…
Geet looked at Gupta and was abt to shout at him for abducting her in her own house… but was instantly scared when she saw a sharp edged axe in his hands… and two men came around and made her stay in her place…

Geet:- what… are you… doing ??? (She stuttered, wriggling herself to get free and then looked at the man who was clad in jeans and shirt… he looked a decent man.. ) plz let me go… (She looked at Maan who was as shocked as she was , looking at the axe)Maan was not finding words to stop his uncle , who seemed to turn in to a devil…
Gupta:- Maan, am asking for the last time … you agree or not??? and if your answer is no, then she will be dead , right now …
Geet looked at Maan and then Gupta… not understanding , what this man wanted ..
Maan:- Have told you already .. No…
Gupta:- ok then… (he looked at Geet) mind it, He is the sole cause of your death…
Geet:-wait… (Geet looked at him) plz, don’t say no.. I don’t want to die ..plz… agree… plz … She now was crying .. and begging from Maan… he stood rooted at his spot…
Maan(ST):-does she even know … what he is asking me to do???
Gupta:- Maan… ???? His aim was to scare both , so that they must agree to get married …and then he will ask Maan, to kill her… He smirked at his thought ..
Maan(Sighed):- he wants us to get married with each other…
Geet(‘s eyes widened in shock):- what ??? who.. who are you???
Before Maan could reply, she felt the axe was nearing her neck… Gupta was getting impatient , in the delay … so, he decided to scare them more…
Maan:- i will marry her… Maan shouted his answer… he knew the tribal ppl were brainless.. and just did what they pleased and so he couldn’t take risk … with Geet’s life…
Geet’s closed eyes got opened in another shock… and tears made their way down to her cheeks …Gupta, dropped the axe and hugged maan.. Maan looked at her ..in utter helplessness… and Geet looked at him in gratitude… she was saved … but she had to pay a price.. and that was .. she had to get married to him… who, was he ???? why she was going to marry him??? why he said yes just to save her life or there was another motive behind that ??? why her mother lied to her ?? ?why her mother wasn’t by her side ??? what those sarpanch’s words meant ??? these all quiz now were running in her mind, like a Flashback.. and she not a single answer of all these questions ….

precap:- the marriage and Gupta’s wicked plans…

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Much love Rose
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4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. monikaseth
    May 16, 2014 @ 08:18:37

    Wow awesome start love it great cs…Omg loved it maan going to marry geet.. What is going to next wanna know… Please update soon

    Reply

  2. tejbommu
    May 16, 2014 @ 13:26:17

    Wonderful! !!! Update. Loved it. Maan is getting married to geet. Waiting for next update. ..:)

    Reply

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