(MG-OS) RISKY CONFESSION CH SK+ PART 1

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Hey all…
Here Am back with another small OS on Maaneet…Its just a small three parts OS … The story is, a bit, inspired from a Hollywood movie …Just a bit, and rest , its my imagination..

Character Sketch

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Geet Verma:- A 24 years old.. Belongs to a rich family.. college student… Her father is a CEO of Verma industries … Her mother died a couple of years back… In order to gain the name in the society, her father has been ignoring his only offspring, resulting Geet became an spoilt brat.. She is a very famous girl in her college of business… She is the star of the college …She has beauty with the brains … A topper.. and so, she always carries an attitude…

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Maan Singh khurrana:- A 25 years old … Belongs to a middle class family…He has got a mother… Who wants her son to be educated enough to grab a nice post in any of the business…He is intelligent too… Always comes second, coz he wants Geet to be the topper… He has a secret crush on the topper of the college-Geet… But he knows there’s no match of hers with his .. So he keeps his crush to himself …
Preeti Singh khurrana:- A 45 years old women… Maan’s mother…she is working as a school principal in a private school to earn more and more money.. Along with her husband’s pension, she is able to handle the house and manages the expenses , quite nicely..
Geet’s friends:- Pinky… Meera… Jia…
Maan’s friends:- Aditya/Adi… Sonam…

PART 1

London…

Geet was sitting with her friends … rather say girls like her-spoilt brats … and was discussing the trip to one of the best sightseeing spots at London.. The college was sponsoring the tour, for the study purposes and everybody was happy at the plan to live there for a week… Hence, it was mean to be the stress buster, after their hectic studies for the exams … and after that final tour, there was a farewell party at the end of the year .. And Maan was watching the star of the college, laughing away with her friends…He too had a ghost of smile playing on his lips … His friends Adi and Sonam were watching him…

Adi:- Can’t you leave her alone ???(Maan looked at him in confusion) If you can’t encourage yourself and go to her, propose her.. Then you must not stare her like this …

Maan(smiled):- Am happy with the way to get a glimpse of her… Anyways (He opened his book and started to read that in concentration)

Sonam:- Leave it(she pointed to the book)We just gave our exams (She closed his book and Maan sighed)ok, tell me, Maan, you are coming to the tour right???

Maan:- As far as I don’t want to waste my precious money on that silly tour, I can’t ignore the fact that Its the part of our course. So, yes am coming …

Adi:- That’s great…

Sonam:- yeah … And who knows you might get a chance to talk to HER???

She teased winking at him, whereas Maan only smiled faintly.. He very well knew they were poles apart .. and nothing can bring them together… unless, Destiny wanted to…

His friends felt bad … that he so much liked Geet.. and she never looked at his way… Maan too never got the courage to go in front of her and confess his liking towards her, maybe , then only she would be able to look at him and his true liking towards her…Making some, excuse Maan left from there, as he was upset …

Adi:- what you did sonam???

Sonam:- what ??? I was just trying to make him smile ..

Adi:- you know that, what he thinks abt her.. Still you don’t stop teasing him…

Sonam:- Arey yaar… He is being in love with her from past 4 years… and still he never gets courage to confront her.If, he is not going to tell her his feelings then how is she gonna know that he likes her very much??? (There was a pause for a few mints and then again Sonam spoke up) I have got an idea… This trip, we both are going to make sure, to give them little privacy, so that they will come close to each other.. and Maan will confess …

Adi:- Achaa… And how are we gonna bring Geet to him???

Sonam(smirked):- That, you leave on me…

Adi:- Stil how ???

Sonam:- Am gonna make an entry in her group and be a friend to her… then , It will be easy to let the love birds meet…

Adi:- Bright idea… So, what are you waiting for … Go and befriends with her…

Sonam and Adi looked at Geet’s direction where Geet was oblivious to the planning happening round her… and was chatting away with her friends …

Geet on the other hand… was busy in deciding on, the clothes … the bags .. the shoes … and other girlie stuffs … She was quite happy with this outing plan… she too wanted to get herself engaged to something, so that she won’t feel the absence of her parents from her life .. and this tour was the best way to run from her home… where she felt burdened and suffocated ..And abt the studies …she never wanted to put her father down, so she was sure, that topping the college-which now was her addiction, She will again top the class… and make her father to look at her in proud…
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All set… The college started its journey for the tour of London’s best sightseeing rivers … and seas …via a Cruise Ship..

Day 1 was a total rocking.. as girls and boys enjoyed being there on the ship.. having fun… chilling out with the profs and friends …

There was one person, who was sitting down the spare boat, attached with the cruise ship-Maan… He always remained detached from the fake world.. working on his laptop, wanting to get an idea of the syllabus of the final year of his college..So that he can study properly… The place was silent… serene and without any noise apart from the water noise.. that was calming his nerves …So, he mentally decided that, he will sit here and make himself busy in some work..

Adi and Sonam looked at him from the top… they couldn’t bring him there with themselves and to make him relaxed …

Adi:- I think, Geet can come down there and have a chat with Maan…

Sonam(smirked at his suggestion):- You read my mind …

Adi looked at her and smiled back … Thinking that as Sonam , now was a group mate of Geet so, she will easily be able to convince Geet to go down there to the spare boat…

Day 2… Geet was standing on the top most part of the ship.. looking at the running water…She already felt bored just on the second day… They needed to reach to some place and then start their actual study tour… But as the ship needed to take break from going on the waters , so for the night the journey stopped and then in the next day, that began… They were supposed to reach to the sea shores, by the 2nd day’s evening …

Geet, initially was sitting with her friends and chatting away but eventually felt bored and was there on the deck, when one of her friends (Sonam) told her that the view from the deck was wow… so she was there … enjoying the cool breeze with the waters … When her eyes fell on the spare boat .. And Maan.. Her Secret crush..Yeah, She too has been fond of him… He was tall, smart, intelligent … and handsome..good looking guy… and of course he was a perfect match for her… But , it was said, that boys need to ask girls out..and no girl could herself would go to the guy and ask him out, unless she was totally insane … But here, She was just fascinated by him… and as he never asked her anything .. Forget asking, he never even came in front of her so, she too behaved otherwise and pretended that she felt nothing ..

But right now, he was just looking out the waters and the sky blankly… lost in some thoughts … She felt , she could see the sadness in his eyes .. and before she could have stopped herself ,she ran down the deck to reach the spare boat… ignoring her friends who were looking at her weirdly, as she just went pass them, without even sparing them a glance … Sonam smiled along with Adi..

Sonam:- Lets see them…

Adi(stopped her):- Hey!! Don’t’ you think, we shouldn’t see or hear them…

Sonam:- Adi, don’t be spoilt sport.. Come on, we will just see them…

Adi(tugged at her elbow and dragged her with himself):- No, that’s not right … Let’s go…Remember, to give them privacy…

Sighing in anger, Sonam went with him…

Down the spare boat…

Geet (coughed and got Maan’s attention):- Umm…Do you mind, if I sit here???

Maan(was startled to see her there):- Uhh!! No , not at all..plz… (He looked away and tried to walk away)

Geet came , with an attitude and sat at the edge of the boat… She was not liking his reservations … She came here to him, forgetting all her egos and here he was just walking away… But she found him stopped at the end of boat and turning to look in her direction…

Maan:- Wo, I, suggest… you shouldn’t sit at the edge…You might fell…

Geet(‘s eyes twinkled with mischief..and she comfortably sat at the edge now):-Achaa…??? Why do you care ???

Maan(offended at her and shook his head):- No no… Was just suggesting … Of course, do as per your wish…

Geet:- Hey Listen !! why are you running away from me ??? Its not like, am gonna eat you up.. you can sit here … and continue with your staring …

Maan:- Am done …

Saying so, he turned but found his hand being caught in hers … and he hold his breath… He wanted to get away from her… He knew, both were no match… and so, he didn’t want to come across a heart break, by looking and getting lost in her eyes, so he had thought to go away from her sight ..But Geet was Geet… She never heard anyone .. and now also she was doing …what she wanted to…

Geet:- Achaa, Listen naa…

Maan(became impatient ):- what ???

Geet:- Will you save me, If I fell back into the waters ???

Maan(looked at her in shock):- What ??

Geet:- Arey !! Was just asking like that … Will you??

Maan(contemplated for a while and then answered ):- Maybe…

Geet(changed the topic):- why you always come 2nd ???

Maan:- Coz, you are the best …

Geet:- or maybe , you want me to be the best.. When in actual, you are …

Geet was just pulling him into her useless convo, so that he would be forced to sit there with her… But He knew, his crush too well… and so, he quickly went from there, even without replying her back…

Evening,

They reached their place and were gone for their tour … They were to spend a few hrs there and then the next morning, they were to be there at the ship… Geet tried to cross Maan’s path, but he didn’t leave her a chance and so she too got angry and then didn’t try to get back to him… when someone wasn’t paying attention to the most desirable girl of the college, then she too could be careless…Adi and Sonam, pulled their hands down from the task as , they saw, Geet, herself was doing efforts to talk to him so they thought they will be together ,when they will be back to their college…

Day 3… Noon,

Ship started its journey form the shores and was now going back..Geet made herself busy with her friends and drinks-that her spoilt friends brought, and had a few shots of them… They were hiding at one place of the ship… making sure, that no one is watching them…After having lots of fun filled with drinks … All the girls sat and went into sleep there …

After an hr

Geet opened her eyes and went to the deck …feeling the cool breeze, and a few drops of rain… and then there she saw Maan down on the boat looking into the pouring sky… It was raining that day, making Geet feel cold..But Maan stood under the sky, feeling the rain, with both of his hands … One look at him, and she recalled his ignorance … She got furious and marched downwards to have a talk with him…

And soon he found her standing in front of him, with angered expressions ..She was there to confront him, ask him what was his problem… He looked at her in confusion…

Maan:- You??? You shouldn’t be here, you might catch cold …

Geet:- you don’t own me… I will do, what I want… will go where I wish to..

Maan(looked away and then nodded):- sure, okhhh.. (saying so he was going when she grabbed his hand)

Geet:- Hey!! What’s your problem??? Why you always run away haan???

Maan:- you .. you are drunk??? In this bright day??(He was shocked and angry at her)

Geet:- why do you pretend to care ??? when…

She was going to cont ,But Maan jerked his hand away and turned away in anger.. causing her to lose her balance… her vision blurred, feet slipped and she fell off the boat, onto the waters … with a shriek…

Maan looked back at her and was shocked to see her in the water… The ship was moving in fast pace, and without thinking twice , he too jumped after her…She was slipping away from his eyes, in the heavy rains and he acted fast…

The sea was deep … and she was drowning, when she felt someone grabbing her waist and pulling her up to the water levels …She was abt to scream but his face came in to her view and she sighed… Her all drunkenness was gone ..So, was the ship, as it was raining heavily, so the head decided to move faster , and then reach to the safest place before night ..

Maan tried to grab his cell phone , but it was dead.. He sighed in anger and tried to yell for help… But there wasn’t any response…

Maan looked at Geet in anger and she now looked at him with cute .. and innocent expressions … wanting to melt his anger down… since she was the cause and was at fault here…

Maan:- Since we can’t live in this sea forever, so let’s swim and reach to the seashore…You know swimming, right???

Geet:- Yes…

Then they both started to swim, after a long time ,Maan saw a shore and He directed Geet for that side… She was exhausted … So was Maan… when they reached the shore, Maan gave her support, even when he was so much exhausted … And Geet totally leaned on his body..

Both sat at the sand ..for a while , to catch their breathes ….Maan looked around to find some source of getting away from that place…
It was an open ground kinda place, with water and trees all around them..

Geet:- we reached an island… She looked around herself and commented … Then both shifted towards the shade of a tree… to save themselves from getting wet in the rains…

Maan:- Looks like, we are trapped ..

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(MG-SS) A COMPROMISED RELATION PART 7 (LAST PART)

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PART 7

Maan was abt to take his cell out and call but Gupta nodded … He very well understood there’s no point to argue or say something … He was blinded by the rage… his own daughter deceived him…then it was his friend’s son there- Maan… he looked lethal right then.. and so he nodded…

Maan:- one more thing… When my men, the guys who brought you here, will drop you to village, you are gonna safely hand yash’s mother to them…with all due respects .. .and yes, do apologize from her for, whatever you have done to her daughter…one scratch on my men, will lead you to death…

Gupta was very scared from his friend’s son… He had never thought that the boy was too much dangerous to mess with.. So he silently nodded to all his demands and after reaching his village did what ever was asked …After A day..Geet’s mother was in front of all of them.. Happy and well…

Geet hugged her mother when she came to Maan’s flat… she was relieved to see her both children safe and happy… with their respective partners ….

After a couple of days …..

Maaneet were lying on their bed … facing the ceiling …Still the awkwardness lingered … around them…

Maan:-Uhh!! Geet…

Geet:- Hmmm…

Maan:- You got your mother back…

Geet(smiled):- yeah!! and am happy for her …But wished she could have lived with us…(Maan was abt to say something when Geet’s words cut him) Its ok, I understand … Our home is so small and mothers aren’t meant to live with their daughters … and SIL… but with son and DIL… so am happy she is living with Yash Bhai .. and Bhabhi….

Maan(sighed, ST):- what was I thinking to ask and she is talking something else…This girl is really weird…

Geet:- well??? She looked at him wanting him to carry on with whatever he wanted to say…

Maan:- uhh!! yeah… I was saying now that you got your mother and bro back.. umm… now what next???

Geet:- Hmm… (she got confused)what next what ???

Maan(Sighed):- Do you want to cont with THIS COMPROMISED RELATION???

Geet:- of course …Umm.. Am happy with you..

Maan(mocked):- so we are gonna remain friends forever ???

Geet(now she got what he wanted to ask):- uhh!! n.. No.. of course we will move forward with this relation…

Maan:- Hmm.. Am glad you got my point … (she shied and looked down nodded) so???

Geet:- Umm.. Lets start today… I mean tonight …

Maan:- what ???He was shocked.. she was all ready to move on in next step of their relation…

Geet:- yeah !! I mean, when we are going to start from any day .. then why not tonight ??? But don’t think of me as some despo…I mean, am not one …

Maan(smiled):- okhh…

He turned onto the side, now facing her… and pulled her to him, by her waist .. leaning on her face.. Their eyes locked with each others … Both felt uncomfortable … with the closeness… Despite of them being tied in a sacred relation… It wasn’t easy to look into each other’s eyes and get closer like that … Both knew the other was uncomfortable and so Maan left her…

Maan:- uhh!! Geet… I.. think.. Not today.. Umm, maybe tomorrow??

Geet nodded feeling shy.. and embarrassed at the same time …To make her feel light… He embraced her in his arms and she willingly kept her head on his chest … Closed eyes … sleeping peacefully…

Next day

Maan returned from his work late and she was waiting for him on dinner table…She was excited and nervous that they are going to take an step tonight to their relation…

Geet:- shall we eat ???

Maan:- Uhh! Geet, am very tired … you eat, am going to bed …

Geet got sad.. But didn’t show to him..and smiled sweetly at him.. That smile had a magic effect .. He always got relaxed when she gave him a happy look… He too smiled and went to the room …

After 15 mints

Maan(ST):- what to do??? I escaped from there just to think on, how to come close to her.. Else am gonna make her upset today as well… She must be having thoughts of consummation and I just let her know that am tired … Uff!! Maan what were you thinking ??? she will think, am not interested in her…

He was thinking of the ways to move on in their this Relation else she was bound to think that it was A Compromised Relation and He wasn’t willing to make their marriage work…So now, he was turning on the bed and thinking … His thoughts were disturbed when Geet opened the door and then closed that behind her… Came to their bed and lied down…Geet looked at Maan, and pouted…

Geet(ST):-Made his fav dinner and he didn’t even taste that … Must be very tired that’s why… Hmmm.. She turned on her side and closed her eyes …

Soon, she felt his hand crawling on her waist and then that rested on her stomach…Geet opened her eyes and with a little bit difficulty ,turned and looked at Maan…

Maan:- sorry…

Geet:- umm ???

Maan:- wanted to wait for you here… Actually was thinking to move on with you… If we want this Compromised Relation work…

She lied on her back, flat and smiled at him… a shy smile… Maan leaned down.. and without any other thought or word, kissed her forehead… she closed her eyes… and he took advantage of that… by Kissing her both eyes…unknowingly she gave him more access… Her hands went around his neck and pulled him to her more… Maan looked at her locked hands round his neck and smiled at her…

Maan(whispered on her face):- Thanks for not making me uncomfortable…

Geet shied yet again and opened her eyes…both looked in each other’s eyes and then leaned to each other… their lips touched…and they parted…

Geet (shied and looked at his face):- You know, I like you more now.. coz you are so shy… even after kissing your own wife…

Maan(played with her hairs):- Hmm.. I know… and I also know that you love seeing me embarrassed …

Geet giggled and nodded… Maan got angry… as she was teasing him.. He leaned down to her face and kissed her on her lips … sealing her lips and in that process silencing her giggles …She smiled in the kiss and kissed him back.. with all her love…

Geet:- I love you…

Maan:- Love you too…

It, no longer was A Compromised Relation… when both were giving each other a much needed chance so that the slight hesitance both had in their minds and hearts was gone… and that night they became one by all means ….

EPILOGUE

After 3 months…

It was another usual hectic day for Maan and Geet… Almost 5pm in the evening .. Geet opened the door of the flat for Maan with a sweet smile..Maan smiled back and after giving her a quick hug, thumped on the couch…Geet served him water first and then his black coffee and like every other day.. Their conversation started with the same questions and same answers …

Maan:- So, how was your day ???

Geet:- Good..

Maan :- Did you submit your resignation ???

Geet:- yeah… I told them that am gonna start my own designer shop and they understood my point…

Maan:- That’s nice… All the Best for tomorrow…

Geet:- you won’t be there??? (Her face fell hearing that he wasn’t going to accompany her on her big day)

Maan:- uhh!! will give a try.. But , you know, its quite…

Geet(completed for him):- Not possible..I understand…

Her expressions saddened and Maan instantly knew, how to cheer her up…

He got up from the couch after putting the mug on the side table and announced…

Maan:- Ok.. Get up… We are gonna watch a movie today and then a sweet .. romantic , candlelight dinner outside… Get ready .. I will just freshen up and join you here…

Like Maan wanted, her saddened face lit up in excitement … and she smiled, looking at the side where Maan went… Geet knew, he was too tired but he got ready to go out with her just to please his wife ..and to compensate for tomorrow’s absence ..Oh !! she couldn’t stop falling for her husband…

As they were abt to step out the main door… They saw Maan’s friends smiling at them…

Vijay:- Hey !! Long time bhabhi…

Raj:- yeah.. Very long time …(Maan glared their way) well, we left you 2 to enjoy for whole 3 months and didn’t show our faces ..

Maan:- Then why came today ???

Ranvir:- Arey !! we were missing our sweet dearest bhabhi.. So came to see you both…

Geet smiled sweetly at His friends and gave them space, in a gesture to welcome them.. But Maan didn’t let them in .. and taking Geet’s hand in his.. Came out.. handling them the flat’s keys… All looked at him in confusion…

Maan:- we are going out on a movie-dinner date .. so be comfortable here and help yourselves …

Saying that Maan moved forward taking her along with him holding her waist while leaving his friends to gape at them mouths wide opened …While Maan and Geet got in the elevators …

Geet(tried to argue):- Maan, That was rude… We shouldn’t …

Maan(cut her):- Oh plz Geet.. You don’t know them…They are blood and time suckers … and Am definitely not IN to hear them chatter non-stop, for am gonna have a great time with you ,tonight .. (He whispered the last part in her ears and Geet elbowed him)

Geet:- Behave Mr Pati Ji…..If someone caught us like that, again, then am gonna be the only one to get embarrassed … in front of all ppl, of this building ..
Geet told him the fact.. when a month ago, they were caught by the ppl, making out in the elevators .. and then started the teasing session of girls … That actually made Geet mad at him… for one whole day…

Maan(sighed and leaned on the elevator’s wall behind, opposite to hers):- How I wish Geet.. Could take you to somewhere where just you and me … and our love is allowed … But well.. My work..

Geet:- and mine too… Geet said, cutting him.. as he again was going to take the whole blame on himself and on his work.. when in actual, she too was involved in her study’s as her final exams were approaching her…

Geet smiled at him and gave a tight , assuring hug.. which Maan reciprocated with a smile…

Maan:- you are such an understanding wife Geet… Be like that …

Geet:- same applies for you… Geet giggled and Maan smiled and kissed her head …

Such was their understanding level…That started to go deep and deeper with passing days …How that started ??? None knew…It just happened with time…And the Relation which started from a Compromise was no longer a Compromised one …

Hey all… So here goes the Epi for ACR… To be honest … I had planned this SS like this … short.. simple and sweet… where two ppl-unknown to each other… were bounded in a marriage by some external factors … and they accepted each other with full heart.. and later moved on in their relation…

So Now you gotta let me know how was maaneet’s journey through ACR … ??? for one last time.. Hit like tab and leave your precious views …And yeah Do ignore the small mistakes as don’t have time nowadays to check the parts after typing …

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(MG-FF)REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE 2 PART 65 (LAST PART) AND EPILOGUE

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Part 65

Chopra’s arrived and khurrana’s discussed the function they wanted to do for the upcoming child in the khurrana’s .. Chopra’s were so grateful at khurrrana’s thinking and they happily agreed…
Arjun, Annie and Geet got busy in discussing the function, from morning itself.. But as Mrs khurrana had instructed earlier .. AA were very careful to let Geet take any worry for arranging that..

In the evening,

Maan returned with Adi, Meera and Yash… They smiled at Geet, while Geet was laughing on something told by her bro and SIL… Geet smiled brightly looking at Maan.. Meera and Arjun teased her.. But Maan was unaffected at the teasing and just hugged a–now blushing Geet, after glaring the teasers…

The function went quite well… and Geet was happy at the end of the day..She couldn’t stop laughing, being in his arms .. Maan just wished she remained like that … He loved her to the core..

After 2 months… in hospital

Maan entered the room, and saw Geet had their baby in her arms… a smile touched his lips as he looked at the way Geet childishly was talking to the baby… His eyes got moistened as he recalled the way Geet was screaming when they carried her to the hospital.. and now looking at her peaceful, smiling face, he couldn’t stop himself and shed the tears of joy…

Geet’s gaze fell on him and she called him near through eyes… He wiped the tears off of his face and nodding went to her bed… She smiled and gave the baby to him…

Maan smiled and took the baby girl in his arms and kissed her on her head first then the cheeks…He turned towards Geet and kissed her forehead too… she smiled …

Maan:- Thank you Geet.. Thank you for bearing the pain for our baby.. and for giving me this gift, that I would cherish , all my life…

Geet(hugged her emotional hubby):- and I too will cherish her… and thanks .. without you.. I wouldn’t have been able to give you this gift of your life..( Maan smiled and Geet giggled ..and started to play with her small hands…) Acha, tell me what shall we name her???

Maan once again smiled… handed their daughter to Geet.. He took out one anklet from his pocket and made the little girl wear that…Geet looked at the happening in confusion…

Geet:- what are you doing ??? she is so small…

Maan:- payal… we will name her as payal… Hmm…????

Geet:- and why that anklet???

Maan:- coz where ever she will go we will know where she is …with this anklet in her foot…

Geet:- but its only one piece… where is the second one???

Maan:- I bought just one … when she is old enough, I will buy her another…

Geet(smiled):- That’s so sweet of you… she said and pulled his cheeks … to which he smiled … at that time they heard , clearing of throats and they were brought back to the room, from the dreamland…

Mr khurrana:- well, if you both are done,we wanted to see our PAYAL…

Geet looked down and shied… knowing that they had heard them talking …

Mrs khurrana (came forward without any word and took payal from Geet):- I so love this name… perfect for our angel… she went and stood with Mrs chopra… who took the baby happily in her arms … they kept passing the baby and playing with her and Maaneet were lost in their own world…

Epilogue

After 4 years

Payal ran into Maaneet’s room called her mom, who apparently was in the shower.. She came in the room and saw her dad, in front of the mirror..getting ready… Maan saw his daughter and smilingly bending down took her up in his arms ..

Maan:- what happened sweetheart…

Payal:- Mama kahan hain??? Badi dadi bula rahi hein… (where’s mama??? Great grandmother calling her..)

Maan:- Hmm.. (He kissed her cheeks and then called Geet) Geet, dadima calling you down..

Geet:- Am coming … She responded from there…

Payal looked at the locked room behind Maan’s shoulder and looked at Maan… Maan smiled naughtily, winking at her , Payal giggled as they made their way inside the shower room…

Soon Geet screamed as she saw Maan and payal inside there and grabbing the bath robe, Geet came out from there…shy… and angry a bit…

Geet:- Maan… what were you doing ???

Maan:- well, your daughter wanted to see you so…

Geet shook her head seeing their daughter nodding her head in yes, as if she knew what Maan was saying.. Geet saw the way Maan made her nod her head towards Geet.. Taking Payal from his arms Geet headed to dressing …while Maan followed…

Geet started to dress her up for the party, which Maan had thrown for Payal’s birthday…though she already was dressed, but lately payal had been gifted a necklace by her aunty Annie… and here she wanted to wear that so Geet was fixing that … While Maan looked at the angels in adoration…

Geet:- seriously Maan, you are too much… .

Maan:- what did I do???

Geet:- what were you trying to do just now ??? Thankfully I almost was out of the shower, else what she might been seeing and taking the things ??? (she kissed Payal’s face) My baby!! She is too small for all these things…

Maan:- Geet, you are worrying for nothing … (He took payal in his arms) she will manage … Hai naa baby… (he asked payal, to which she nodded, followed by a kiss on his cheeks) see, she loves her daddy more .. she didn’t kiss you.. (He said and winked at Geet.. she just shook her head and went down for the party, knowing the father-daughter were always in one team)..Maan followed after her…

At the middle of the hall, there was a table set with the birthday cake.. balloons and teddy round the whole hall… Everybody sang the birthday song and Payal cut the cake with her daddy’s hand…

she was fond of her dad more than her mother… Geet never felt J of the fact that she was ignored with Maan’s presence around payal… she actually loved the bonding Maan had built with payal..

Being out of the home for almost whole day it was very difficult for Maan to meet his own daughter quite easily… but Geet gave her best to bring the daughter-father together.. and so, payal never felt deprived of her father’s love .. care… pampering…

And that was the reason.. payal gave the first bite to Maan.. Geet smiled… as she knew what Maan would be doing with that cake piece.. like every year he did…

Maan took the piece before Geet’s mouth first and when she ate.. She made him eat the rest of the piece.. Geet bend down, and fed payal the cake followed by the rest of the family…

Once done. With the cakes… then came the time, for gifts giving…. Everyone gave the gift to the birthday girl, except Maan… He never gave gift in front of whole family… though every member knew what Maan would be gifting .. but Maan made sure to give that privately…

Arjun:- Come on Maan.. This year give this gift at least in front of all..

Maan(smirked):- you wish… (he bend down and took payal in his arms.. and she was as always excited to see the same gift which she got every year..)

Annie:- Bhai plz… at least for once let us know … naa…

Maan:- As if you guys don’t know ???

Elders smiled at the kids.. shaking their heads .. Mr khurrana guided chopra’s to the living room.. and the kids fights went on and on…

But Maan being Maan, didn’t tell anyone abt anything and went to the room.. Geet looked at her bro and rest of the friends , feeling sorry for them..

Meera:-what yaar !! couldn’t you ask him to show us all..

Geet:- what’s the use to ask, when I know he will just shrug that off..

Adi:- still yaar..

Yash:- what yaar… why are you guys blaming bhabhi for this ??? Arey, we all know his secret gift, so what’s the point to crib abt that ???

Meera :- ok.. lets go yash… Am tired… ok Geet… good night…

They and chopra’s bid bye to everybody… Geet got engaged with settling everything back… she loved to help ppl.. and so she always helped Nakul and other servants despite of Maan’s continuous calls …Finally done with them she climbed to her own bed room…

Opening the door she saw Maan and payal sleeping …she was all over Maan..and gift wrappers spread on the bed… Geet shook her head thinking they must be waiting for her and then fell asleep..she removed her jewelry, then heard Maan’s voice…

Maan:- Finally… all set… ???

Geet(smiled):- yes…(she paused) you are awake…

Maan:- Not only me, but she too… (payal rubbed her eyes and sat on Maan’s stomach smiling at her parents) you know I don’t gift her without you…

Geet shook her head and headed towards the bed.. sitting on edge, eyed Maan to give the gift… Maan took out the wrapper and payal opened that with same excitement, she every yr has..

Taking out the anklet from gift wrapper she handed that to Maan..
Maan took payal in his arms and made her wear that.. payal clapped her hands in happiness.. and kissed Maan on his cheeks …

Payal:- Thank you papa.. and then hugged Maan… soon she again dosed off on his shoulder…

Maaneet smiled looking at their angel… Maan then placed her on bed and pulled Geet to him..

Geet (gasped):- Maan.. let me change..

Maan:- you are looking good in this .. Now sleep.. you exhaust yourself too much..

Geet sighed in his embrace… as she knew Maan wouldn’t let her go now, soon she closed her eyes giving in, to tiredness…

Maan looked at her face, smilingly, caressing her head.. giving her head massage..His family was completed … His dreams were fulfilled… He had a caring, loving and beautiful wife… and an angel… who made him forget all his anger and business, once entered the mansion… His lovely ,supporting parents and grandparents … who accepted Geet and forgot their enmities …and His REVENGEFUL MARRIAGE turned into LOVE FILLED MARRIAGE…

The end …

Tada!!! Finally, am posting the end part of the story…I made Epi part longer than that of the last part… so the whole update is abt 1800 plus words.. Hmm.. can I get to know how this whole journey of maaneet was,Not to forget the last part and epi ???? I had come across lots of NEW readers, firstly thank you so much for reading my story… and second, lots of readers left it .. That definitely made me upset.. but I didn’t lose my own interest in my story seeing the less likes … as no matter how many readers I get , I have to end the story, the way I had thought about … so.. over to you all… plz leave your comments on the end part of RM 2..
Yeah RM 3, well as said … shall start with that soon for now have posted the intro .. Do let me know how did you find it, following the link…

A reader of mine was asking of this particular part from RM season 2(that I forgot to update in here) Ehh!! long time..Thanks for reminder @Candy_js .. Now this story is completed …

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