MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 9(Last part)

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Part 9

Next day, Maan took Geet with him and already his family had accepted giving in to Maan’s wishes and liking .. But they thought to stay away from her as after all she was a human…

Maan’s mother:- welcome home beta.

Geet(smiled uncomfortably):-Thank you..

Maan’s mother:- Am Maan’s mother…

Maan’s father:- Umm.. you can call us, Maan’s foster parents …after all, coz of US , he is what he is …

Geet looked at him with little fear and anger… Anger, for making Maan a vampire.. and fear, looking at his smile-cum-smirk…

Maan held Geet’s hand and made her walk with him, totally unaffected with his father’s remarks…
They came face to face with a girl.. Geet assumed that she was younger than her…

Annie:- Hi…. Am annie.. Maan bhai’s little sister…

Maan smiled and took her in a side hug… kissing her head he looked at Geet..

Maan:- she is the only one in this house, I care… Annie is my REAL sister…

Geet smiled and looked at the girl… shaking hands with her… But the girl seemed to be in a hurry…

Annie:- oh !! Am sorry bhai, need to go for tuitions … (then Annie looked at Geet) Hey !! will you be here till evening ?? I will be back then we will chat and hang around… ok..

Geet(smiled yet again at her innocence ):- sure…

Once, hugging her bro Annie went smilingly.. Geet then turned to Maan still looking at her retreating figure…

Geet:- she is sweet… But what you meant by your REAL sister???

Maan(looked at Geet):- Annie is my biological sister…

Geet(looked at him shocked, she had thought he was saying REAL just like that but here he cleared her doubts off, her mind):- Is she …. Is she too… I mean…

Maan(read her quiz running in her mind and replied before she could comprehend and re-arrange her quiz,he answered):- yes… she is a vampire… (then looking away he added) I… I made her…

Geet,shocked beyond limits, just looked at him…. And he had to cont…

Maan:- That’s why I don’t want you to become a vampire… Am already suffering from guilt for making Annie a vampire… I don’t want to add another vampire to my clan…

Geet:- How… How can you make your own sister a vampire???

Maan(sighed):- I had no choice… My foster parents, were after her… After making me a vampire.. I wanted to save her from that painful death.. and I had promised my dying-human parents to always take care of her… so I had made her a vampire.. to take care of her and save her from other vampires …I regret though, but I can’t un-do that … so I want you to be a human… (he turned and hold Geet by shoulders ) I like you .. but I won’t kill you for my personal motives and needs… Geet live your life . Go back to India … Don’t come to me .. Marry someone, who will give you all due respect and love … not a monster like me …

Geet(closed his mouth):- Don’t blame yourself for whatever you have done ..you are great Maan.. Am feeling great to know that you took such step for your own sister.. Trust me, that was the best you could have done for your sister… Trust me, you didn’t do anything wrong …(she paused and then said )But, she wasn’t affected with my.. I mean human’s presence???

Maan:- she won’t be… she is a vegetarian …(Geet looked at him confused, he sighed and explained) I made her vampire, but I didn’t force her to kill human’s … and eventually she settled herself on being a vegetarian…

Geet:- That’s nice….At least I will mingle with her without fearing..
Geet giggled and Maan smiled.. she then kissed his cheek and hugged him…He parted her from himself, soon after the small kiss..to which she looked at him disappointed … Maan sighed and took her hand in his, went to show her around his house..

After going through everywhere finally they reached Maan’s bedroom.. He urged her to go in first and she was awed looking at the room.. the only color appeared to her eyes was black color.. unlike the rest of the house, which was totally white…Maan though had known what was running in her mind but he didn’t ans her unasked quiz, coz he didn’t know what to ans… Geet guessed ,his cool ..and something popped up in her mind…he was standing facing her and his back to the bed ..

she ran deliberately and bumped into him.. unaware of her naughty thinking, Maan caught her on time in his grip and both landed on the bed.. she was lying completely over him and Maan was trying his best not to look at her..control his thirst… while she was enjoying looking at his closed eyes and turned face…

Maan:- Geet, move…

Geet:- No… she said and kissed his cheek… in an split second,he pushed her off him..she was lying under him and he had his mouth on her neck.. Geet was totally shocked … He whispered near her ear..

Maan:- Afraid ???

Geet:- A bit …

Maan looked into her eyes and saw the Trust in them… She wrapped her arms around him to pull him closer But Maan jerked and stood on his feet in no time ..He sighed looking down…

Maan:-Geet, don’t get closer with me, plz..

Geet (hugged him from behind and nodded) :- Sorry, I didn’t meant to hurt you.. I just wanted you to feel free around me …

Maan (turned and hugged her):- I can never be sure, to not to hurt you…… Am not a human after all.. I don’t have these humanly emotions in me .. we will get used with each other… soon…

Geet nodded still in the hug, Maan parted after a while as His mother called for lunch, they went down and soon she felt comfortable to be around the family of vampires…

The next step was, to ask her family for the marriage…. Though it was too difficult for the vampires to do these family kinda gathering with humans .. but they did for Maan.. and his mate-his love .. But to be on safe side, Maan decided to move out of the reach of other vampires… so He thought to shift back in India- in his future, in-laws city , after the marriage…

Maan asked for Geet’s hand from her parents and they were happy to marry her off to their son’s friend.. {guys don’t think that as now Geet’s bro is a part of Maan’s family, maaneet will be siblings.. No they can’t be.. right!!! See the logic here..the vampire’s family don’t share the blood relations..} Geet’s friends were also happy to see her back into her own self and getting her love of life back.. and they lived happily ever after…

Hey all.. So , this story came to an end ..How was it .. ??? were you expecting a wed night in the Epi.. umm sorry but am not writing any Epi for this story… Didn’t feel like going on to there and start another story from there.. so left it on a happy note.. yeah I did make changes .. and molded the story as per suggestions and reqs.. One thing , I know, lots of you would be disappointed that I didn’t take up your reqs and move on with ACBK’s new thread-extending the parts. …. I did give that a thought But honestly Am not having time to make few more parts of this one …(one, my time is eaten up by training and 2, the un-scheduled power cuts like eat my time of typing…) As this story was already written and its end was decided before I posted .. If you wish, I can try for Epi after January is over And also the responses to this part……If not willing then consider this an end.. Can I expect few more words of comments and few silent readers views as well?? Thanks to all those who were there with me in this Maaneet Journey…

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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 8

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Part 8

Geet:- Don’t you think , our destiny always bring us together…

Maan:- Its not… I came to you, deliberately… just came to save you from those vamps …

Geet:- But even .. you came… you care for me … you too like me .. you confessed then…

Maan:- Am not denying … I did… but we are poles apart… Get that straight …

Maan stopped in front of her flat and dropped her to her feet… She looked at her flat and looked at him back, in disbelieve…

Geet:- you knew, where I live.. Even then in all the days of my stay here… you didn’t come even once to look at me .. to meet me???

Maan:- Am just trying to help you, till whenever I could …but don’t put yourself in danger Geet… I might not be there next time … when you need me … so don’t wait for the help from me … Sydney is vampires birth place.. you will find US everywhere.. so beware..

Saying that he flew away from there… without even looking at Geet’s teary eyes… her helplessness increased …Her heart again started to dream abt him… and he just vanished once again like that .…

After that evening, he never faced her… and she always went in search of him…But like he had said, he didn’t show up… However, Geet this time was adamant to search him and so today she again was roaming around a narrow street in the darkness of the night … searching for him .. Thinking, that he might come to her when he sees her helplessness… and longing for him…But she forgot his warning abt Sydney and vampires connection…

Lost, carelessly, she was going and looking here and there, in her own thoughts when someone came face to face with her… Geet got scared looking at her own bro in front of her… what an irony, she feared her own bro, who was meant to be her savior …along with 3 more vamps …

Geet’s bro:- From the time I have seen you.. I wanted your blood.. and now when Maan has left you.. am feeling bad..

Geet couldn’t come to conclusion whether he was feeling really bad at her or mocking her.. So she looked at him and fearing the worst with his each step, closed her eyes tight .. Pushed him and ran ahead of them..

Geet’s bro didn’t miss that chance and pulled her back and she hit his broad chest .. He leaned down inhaling her.. and was abt to bite her on the neck.. when suddenly someone grab his head and pulled him off her neck.. She hit the ground at that commotion …When she looked back she couldn’t take her eyes off Him.. yes, Maan… He was right there.. fighting for her as always .. and she kept looking at him.. He was right there in front of her after so many days .. weeks…Getting rid from her bro.. Maan took Geet with him and ran cutting through everything .. He dropped her on her feet once she was out from the danger and then blasted in anger…

Maan:- can’t you live by yourself ???

Geet:- I was trying to…

Maan(grabbed her arms and jerked her to him):- what were you trying to han??? Why you keep looking for me Geet… ?? why ??? I told you, and it was over.. then why…

He pushed her away from him and she shivered the way he was looking at her..

Geet:- then kill me, and finish my miseries… do that .. Come on..

Maan:- Fine then, if that’s what you want ..

He had had enough of her killing threats and wishes .. so he thought to finish the thing off .. He pulled her up to his level.. and looked directly in her eyes.. Her eyes didn’t wavered–as if she was determined to die..fully ready to die.. He got that determination of her to die for him..

Being non-human creature, he decided to do the dual work.. to kill his thirst and fulfill her wish too.. She closed her eyes when she saw he was nearing her neck.. A little fear was there… that, it was going to be painful and she knew that …but the pain of separation was more than that, she thought that and gave herself in his hands …

Next second, she felt his sharp teeth piercing her skin and she felt like screaming .. But voice fell to come out from her vocals.. As she didn’t want him to stop this time .. Instead, she wrapped her arms around him.. telling him that she wanted to be with him.. and He again stopped .. Right there after just giving her the small bite.. and no death came to her.. He drank the blood drops from her neck then withdrew himself from her.. Amazed at the love of her… for a monster like him.. She had her eyes closed.. and he could see the tears on her cheeks .. He kissed her tears and she instantly opened her eyes … Maan saw she was scared but her eyes were determined still …He stepped back from her..

Maan:- Don’t … I don’t deserve this .. Hate me Geet.. but don’t love me .. am not able to kill you.. and neither I want you to be killed by my family..

They stayed there after that sentence by Maan for a while then they heard a voice..

Geet’s bro :- Then don’t … We will accept her as a family ..

Vampire 1:- yes.. we will talk to dad..

Maan:- what are you guys doing here???

Vampire 2:- He (pointing at vampire bro of Geet) brought us here.. He told us that we will scare Geet and so you will show up.. we were looking at her from so many days .. she was searching you.. but you didn’t come for her so we all planned to get you two back..

Geet’s bro:- And don’t worry .. Dad won’t mind her as a part of our family…(He paused and then looking at Geet he added) Though I don’t remember anything but I feel like your brother…

Geet smiled and ran to him.. Hugged him.. Geet’s bro stepped back quickly and smiled a bit .. Geet got the hint that He was afraid that he might kill her, so stood by Maan’s side …Maan smiled and hugged her sidewise..Relieved that they were thinking to accept her as a family .. and he will not have to kill her… make her like them..

Precap:- Last part ….
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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 6

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PART 6

wazud mera nahi
par phir bhi ,zinda hu main !
kyu bhatak raha tha ,
sadiyyon se !
yeh tujhe dekh kar ,
ab jaana hu main !

seene main pyaas thi ,
tere lahu ki !
jise liye kab se ,
tadap raha tha main !
milli tu .
to lagaa
ki suraj ki tapti
hui garmi ,
jo jal rahi hai mere ander
bujha luga usse !
pee kar tera lahu ,in hootho se !

par ye kambakht ahsaas,
jo nahi the kabhi mere paas !
kyu jagne hai laage
paa kar ,
tere saanso ke garm ahsaas !
poem by Nishu-thank you sweets.. I loved it ..perfect for the current situation…
Maan:- I never told you to trust me .. its your wish.. coz, one day you are going to be killed either by me or by my mates .. (he looked behind her and she followed his gaze)
She clutched his shirt tightly and pushed herself onto him… as she saw the three vampires of that day , in front of them..

Maan:- I told you all.. she is with me … stay away from her..

Vampire 1:- I wonder, what’s in this girl that we find you with her often ???

Vampire 2:- we don’t intend to harm her.. of course we know not to mess with you..

Maan:- Then how come you are here??? He was looking at them in anger..

Vampire 3:- oh well!! We were just passing by and we smelt blood .. so our thirst brought us here..

Vampire 2:- But as I said, we don’t intend to mess with you.. (He came forward and stood right in front of Maan..facing Geet..)But am wondering how you can stand so close to her and still doesn’t her blood attract you???

Vampire 4:-(Geet’s bro-Also came there and looked at Geet… He had his eyes on her):- I would have killed her, if Maan was not here right now…

Maan:- you will never ever be able to kill her …

Geet’s bro:- she called me bro that day … come on, give me your blood girl.. If you think am your bro… He laughed and so did others … but Maan glared him and Geet looked at him in fear.. grasping Maan’s shirt tightly..As if asking Him to not to leave her… and Maan was standing with Geet in his arms quite un affected by her bro’s threat ..

Maan:- Enough … I repeat don’t go against me .. Else, you all will pay… so stay away from this girl…

Saying that, he took Geet’s hand in his and went away from there… Geet kept glancing her bro, in sadness.. Helplessness and a little fear was also there.. wasn’t a brother supposed to be a protector rather than killer of his own sister… ??? and here she was taking help of the vampire, an stranger..who once wanted to kill her ..and now was her kinda savior …

Geet:- why doesn’t he recognize me ??? you too know abt your past life.. then can’t he ??

Maan:- No, I know coz, I have been a vampire since long time … and he just is kinda newbie to our vampire clan…He will take time to know his past life and family ..

Geet :- oh .. Totally sad abt what she came to know..

Maan:- Anyways, we are leaving this city in couple of days .. so then no one will bother you..

Geet(was shocked hearing that):- What?? You are going ??? (He looked at her and nodded , he knew she was sad at that revelation..He had decided at that time only to save her for once and for all )

Maan:- yes..

Geet:- why???

Maan:- you know the reasons … Don’t you???

Geet:- But… Its not the solution.. you. Can’t leave.. me…

Maan:- Am no one to you… There’s no US in here…I told you, I will kill you, once I lost my cool.. so its better … stay away..

Saying so, he started to go from there.. and Geet looked at his back towards her.. But He stopped hearing her…

Geet:- I already lost my bro.. and now after long time .. I had got you.. the one, as a support to me .. and now you too are leaving me .. (she came to him and looked at his eyes) I promise , I won’t scream if you bite me.. but don’t leave me .. plz..trust me I won’t be able to live without you… I will kill myself… my life is already a burden to me.. and now that I have known that I won’t be getting my bro back, it has shattered my tiny hope to built and boost my parents trust on that truth… Am going to be dead for sure.. then why shouldn’t we be together… I know am being selfish.. but I can’t live with that burden on me .. plz let me come with you.. let me be with you.. I will not bother you… will do, whatever you say.. but just don’t leave me and go..

Maan(was getting irritated with her again and again talking to be with him and to do anything for him):- you won’t be able to go back to your family once you are marked by me as a vampire’s ..Its too much risky .. Trust me no one wants to be a vampire by own self..Am regretting the time , when I met someone and became a vampire by an accident .. and am very much aware of the facts of being a human… so I advise you to go back to your family and never look for me .. Be happy with whatever you have left with… and be safe..

This was the last line said by Maan to Geet.. and she doubted her happiness… without him Now.. she had liked him and almost confessed to him in various possible ways, though didn’t tell him the three words of confession but she knew He was intelligent that much at the least to get the hint from her unsaid words.. But , at last He left her to live her life without him..

She had thought of her life to get that to normal mode .. but now that she had fallen for him and was rejected as well.. she was feeling low on herself and her infatuation towards a vampire.. and so she tried to cope up with her life and family…
what a fool she was, she was to leave her family for a monster like him… No, she wasn’t that much fool to do the sin of ditching her own family .. Her parents .. for the person… the beast who had killed her brother…

It has been a month of Maan and his family’s departure from the city, and despite of having Maan’s memories in Geet’s mind and heart, she was able to carry on with her life.. Her family, parents and her friends were always her best support… She was thankful to them as she told them she liked Maan but he left for his some personal issues of course the truth was hidden which only she knew.. and her friends were there to support her ..
They thought Maan broke up with her and left her.. Didn’t question her of that ..for, they knew she was broken and she will be upset if they questioned her..

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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 5

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PART 5

Maan:- you should not meet me again… don’t think I will spare you..after all am not a human like you.. I will kill you if I lost my control .. so its best for you to stay away from me..from us .. and be on safe side.. saying so he went from there , leaving her behind to think deeply on his words..
He had read her mind and her mind was saying that she has started to like him..and it wasn’t in His control to make her a part of his dead life..and his clan would not have approved a human as a part of their family.. Already they wanted her blood .. so the best option he gave her and left matters in her own hands now ..

After that convo with Maan, Geet decided to try to maintain the distance from him .. so she tried to ignore him by involving herself in studies more and more and chilling out with her friends … she had decided to not to tell him abt her liking towards him.. and try to forget him..
Today she was out with Meera and pinky for shopping .. unaware of the fact that, despite of telling her to stay away from him, Maan was following her everywhere.. He had a fear that she might end up falling into his mate’s plans and be killed by them.. He was now adamant to let her live .. peacefully..
The trio walked and shopped in the mall and by the end of 2 hrs Meera was tired ..so she told Geet and pinky that she was now going .. pinky too insisted to go but Geet wanted to be out of His thoughts and so she kept forcing Pinky for few mints .. which weren’t mints but another hour.. ..
At last Geet told pinky to sit in one particular chair, she will be back after buying some more stuffs-finally got her choice of dress.. and then Geet was gone in the crowded mall…
Suddenly there was an announcement abt some electric short-circuit and the mall was ablaze..The whole mall was started to get empty..
Geet too ran from there in haste .. and in that she lost her way to pinky as was pushed back by the crowd ..she was fearing the thoughts which were coming into her mind..she sat at one corner and cried, hugging her self tightly, waitign for the crowd pass her..
suddenly a hand pulled her back..she gasped but then looked at the person who hold her back..pulled her up in an standing position… It was Maan, she looked at him and a sudden relief appeared on her face.. she hugged him out of fear .. He groaned and controlled his beast self..pulled her out from hug and carried her in his arms.. she looked at him shocked and then her surroundings .. in embarrassment..He didn’t look at her face, just straight, he was taking long steps to get out from the crowd.. Geet kept looking at him..
Geet:- How come you are here all of sudden ???(when Maan didn’t reply she asked again) Maan, am waiting for an ans???
Maan:- was just passing by..
Geet:- you are lying (she made him look into her eyes..at first she shivered with his cold skin.. Maan tightened his jaws.. at her touch on him) Right ???
Maan:- Think whatever you want to..
Saying that he started to run.. and in split secs they were in the air.. Geet gasped and then realized both were on a lonely road.. she panicked.. tightening her hold on his neck..
Geet:- where are you taking me??? plz.. you aren’t killing me right…
Maan:- what if, I have changed my mind ??? He glared at her, in anger and frustration. Since you don’t keep up to your promises..
Geet:- plz,I didn’t break the promise.. and you too promised me .. and now you are..

suddenly he was stopped ..and left her to her feet…she was still looking around when he pinned her to the wall…she gasped and looked at him in fear, trying to free her off from his strong hard deathly grip..
Geet:- what ??
Maan(cut her):- shh !! I told you to stay away from me .. Didn’t I?? (she nodded) but you still are, thinking abt me …why??? Don’t you know, how dangerous I am for you??? (She looked down and nodded yes..felt helpless in front of her changing emotions for him) and if you aren’t out from my sight.. Even am helpless but to get attracted towards you.. (She looked at him, confused what he just said ..He leaned forward and rested his cheek on hers, whispering in her ears) I like you ..Am attracted towards you.. but you know , we aren’t meant for each other.. so stay away from me ..for your own good..
She was lost in his sweet confession.. It was very difficult for him to stay calm while she was crying .. he could see her helplessness..
She gripped his shoulder and hugged him.. pressing herself into him..Maan took a long breath and pulled away from her hug .. she looked into his eyes…
Geet:- I think I have fallen for you.. This was your prize of that day when you let me meet my bro..
Maan:- I know you have … but that’s not right ..
Geet:- can’t we be together…
Maan:- No.. am a beast Geet… I will kill you, one day if I lost control over my beast self .. so stay away.. Distance is required, for both of us …
Geet:- Am ready to be killed …
Maan:- And what abt your dying family ??? your family is almost already dead with your bro’s loss.. you too want to do the same ??
Geet:- why are you bothering too much??? She was suspicious …Maan sighed and looked away..
Maan:- stay away from me Geet.. That’s better for you and for your family too…
Geet:- Fine, but only if you stop following me everywhere…
Maan(rudely):- I don’t follow your everywhere…
Geet:- oh really !! that’s why you were there at that mall when there was rush out there.. I know you follow me everywhere.. just like I do…
Maan(ST):- weird girl !! Am trying to save her and she is all ready to be killed ..How to tell her, I too lost my so called family …years ago and became a monster … How it feels to be killed … and she is all ready to be with a vampire … she is insane… fine..then..
Suddenly he grabbed her neck and leaned on her .. Geet gasped at the sudden action and looked at him in fear.. wriggled in his tight hold..
Geet:- what are you doing ???
Maan:- you want to be with me ??? Right ??? so you wanna be a vampire as well.. so I thought to fulfill your wish..
Geet:- No No.. .(she fought with his hold and screamed) ..No plz, I don’t wanna die.. leave me .. .
Maan instantly left her as he saw she was scared .. crying badly .. hitting him.. punching him, but in vain… she pulled herself away from him and looked at him..accusing him .
Maan:- what ??? you said you are ready to die.. (Geet didn’t reply but just stared at him.. Maan sighed and pulled her again to himself and she didn’t struggle this time as she knew he was calm and wasn’t going to kill her ..and she was ready to be pulled by him) its very easy for someone to say they can die for someone but in reality.. Its way too dangerous to even think abt the death..Death is very painful…
Geet:- so ??? you were giving me a live demo of that ??? (He nodded and she started to cry) I trusted you ..
Maan:- I never told you to trust me .. Its your own wish.. coz, one day you are going to be killed either by me or by my mates .. (he looked behind her and she followed his gaze)

She clutched his shirt tightly and pushed herself onto him… as she saw the three vampires of that day, in front of them..
Note plz:-
Hey all..See you all, after my exams … very soon…

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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 4

cold 2 final

Part 4

But unlike that what was told by Maan to Geet..she felt like , she had developed liking towards him… despite knowing he was not a human.. A vampire-to be precise.. but it was like, it wasn’t in her control to stop herself from thinking abt him… she often found Maan staring at her, in the campus and one day finally she decided to confront him…and know more abt him.. she had left a note on his desk at the end of class..to meet wit hher…

And there he was sitting in front of her.. and she was looking here and there nervously..

Maan:- what ??? He asked after sitting there for like ages ..alone.. staring at her, who was only avoiding his gaze..

Geet:- I never saw you here in this city before … so how come you .. came all of sudden ???
Maan looked at her for a while but didn’t ans her.. somewhere He knew she will ask questions .. not not a question…

Maan:- Am I here for a rapid fire round ??.. sorry am not interested… saying so he was abt to run away but Geet hold his hand .. to which he looked at her, confused…

Geet:- you will get a surprise prize for answering my quiz… Think abt it ???

Maan(smirked, looking at the small girl-A mere human.. who was offering him the prize):- what possibly you can give me as a prize???

Geet(fumbled with his intense gaze) :- uhh !! wo… that’s … that’s a secret …

Maan(laughed and sat beside her, looking ahead ):- Hmm.. ask….whatever you want to ..and anyways I trust you.. as you still are under my clutches so no harm to tell you everything abt us.. Hmmm, to start with your quiz.. we escaped from the previous place.. we had to run,to save our identity from ppl…

Geet:- And why you killed my brother???

Maan(looked at her seriously):- I didn’t… you met other family members of mine that night … one of them killed him.. I too wanted to drink his blood but then he was more thirsty than me so your bro was killed by him..

Geet:- you wanted to kill me too???

Maan:- yeah !! if I need to give you an honest ans .. yes, I wanted to as you smelt same like your bro did.. and that’s why you were attacked by them that night ..your blood is our weakness..

Geet:- why you killed pari ??

Maan(looked at her for a while then said ):- vampires choose their target after having a taste of the humans .. If it’s good for the individuals then only we plan to trap them or simply kill them…I tasted your blood that day and pari’s as well in other occasion….so I had to target her for my own survival..I had to kill her… once in months, I need blood …

Geet:- Is my brother alive ???

Maan(sighed):- yes he is .. but like I told you that day he is one of us now..

Geet:- can you plz take me to him… ???we are incomplete without him.. maa is still waiting for him..and…

Maan:- what’s the point, he won’t recognize you anyways .. and besides as he is new in our clan he can’t come out coz he can attack anyone at any time ..He is in tight security, we provide him meals .. so you can’t meet him.. sorry..

Geet:- plz, don’t do that … achaa I will just see him once and then go from there I promise.. plz let me see him.. plz.. just once..

Maan(closed his eyes,and thought something, then nodded):-ok..

Next day, Maan took her to one secluded place.. Her instincts told her to stop and turn back.. but the happiness of seeing her bro after so long time, over powered that instinct.. Besides, she still had some faith on that vampire that he wouldn’t harm her if she kept her promise intact ..

Maan knew, her fears, her insecurities too well, but he was surprised the risk she was taking in seeing her bro… He would attack his own sis for sure…as He was no more her bro now..but a slave… Maan was alert with his sharp teethes to protect her, from her own bro…

Maan (ST):- what an irony.. Humans … Too silly and complicated to understand…

They reached the particular spot and Maan stopped … then turned and looked at Geet.. He smiled looking at her face and her hand, which had griped his own..cold one .. .both were cold .. Geet was cold out of fear..She turned and looked at him…

Geet:- Le… Lets go from here….I don’t want to be here… but Maan’s words stopped her…

Maan:- won’t you see your bro?? He eyed her backwards and she was bounded to turn and look at the creature who was her bro once..

He was someone else, rather than her bro.. His features changed .. A cold expression.. Bloody eyes .. and a smirk was played there on his lips ..He seemed distant from her…

Geet(ST):- Maan was right .. He is no more my bro..
Suddenly she saw his smirk changed in to smile .. His expressions changed to normal one.. She saw her bro in him.. at that instant she didn’t think of anything and pulling her hand off from Maan’s hand…ran to hug her bro.. tightly..seeking solace for her bleeding heart.. that wanted her brother back to her home.. with her parents .. like a perfect family…

Her bro didn’t hug he back.. But he only smelt her blood .. and was ready to bite her..
Maan was shocked with her sudden run and rushed to her to save her…from her own bro..

Just as her bro was abt to bite .. Geet was pulled backwards.. she hit the wall behind .. Her bro came forward to bite her but Maan fought with the vampire.. with his vampire skills ..and after few mints her bro calmed down..who was eager to drink her blood..Maan pushed him back and 2 more vampires took care of her bro..

Maan took Geet with him and flew away from there.. Geet , all the while was so shocked that she just did , what was told and gave herself in Maan’s hands…Maan stopped near her home … and looked at her.. shocked face..

Maan:- I told you, he won’t recognize you..(she didn’t respond ,he sighed and said)Go home ..

Geet:- kill me ..(she looked into his eyes) kill me . that’s what you wanted right ??? so do it and free me off from this fear of getting killed any day.. either by you or by your vampire fellows..

Maan(looked away):- If I could, I would have killed you long before.. on our first meet at itself .. but I can’t kill you.. since then am controlling my thirst for your blood.. coz I know, I can have anything else but you.. but your bro, he is new to our clan..he would take few years of time to control himself..

Geet:- But still, he will be the same … Right ??? He won’t recognize any of us ???

Maan:- yes.. He will never …

Geet kept looking at him.. Maan sighed and looked back at her..

Maan:- you should not meet me again… don’t think I will spare you..after all am not a human like you.. I will kill you if I lost my control .. so its best for you to stay away from me..from us .. and be on safe side.. saying so he went from there , leaving her behind to think deeply on his words..

He had read her mind and her mind was saying that she has started to like him..and it wasn’t in His control to make her a part of his dead life..and his clan would not have approved a human as a part of their family.. Already they wanted her blood .. so the best option he gave her and left matters in her own hands now …

precap:- Geet in danger….
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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 3

cold 2 final

Part 3

As he neared her neck, Geet felt like screaming ..But she had consented , she so much wanted her brother to be back with her family that she sacrificed her own life for good ..though, as in reflex, she struggled to get out of the tight grip on her hair and her waist..Maan was abt to bite her, but then something happened and he inhaled sharply and kissed her instead of biting..Geet slowly opened her eyes feeling his lips touching her neck..instead of his sharp teethes ..in her struggles, she had hurt her hand by rubbing them in her own palms, her nails did hurt her palm and blood came out from there..
Maan’s attention instantly was on her palm.. scaring Geet.. He grabbed her hand and started to suck her blood drop from her hand .. Geet was shaking badly but his concentration was only on her palm..

Geet:- plz.. don’t .. do .. that …

Maan(ST):- perfect.. My intuitions were right … she is the best one I can have …
But He was angry on not being able to kill her.. He tried a lot .. but something stopped him..He was attracted towards her.. He didn’t want to kill her for his benefit … He felt bad on doing so…He breathed harder and pulled himself away from her neck..both had an eye contact .. She felt scared looking into blood red eyes .. He had a very hard time, still smelling her .. and not biting her.. He wanted to kill and drink her blood .. But he stopped ..unwillingly..

Maan:- Do you wanna live ??? (Geet’s teary eyes were surprised but then nodded yes vigorously) then lets make another deal,forget the first one.. Dare you tell anyone abt my true identity .. (Geet immediately nodded no) Am letting you go just for once .. If you tried to open your mouth in front of anyone .. I will kill you right on the spot.. and you know , you can never hide from me .. (Geet nodded)

Geet:- I .. I .. won’t tell anyone .. I promise ..

Maan:- Go…
He gave her a side and She ran away from there.. Maan controlled his urge to go after her and kill her .. looking away he vanished in the darkness of the night …

Geet reached home and went to bed telling her family she had her dinner outside with friends .. she was so frightened to see lots of things happening just in one night ..
Pari-her competitor was dead and She-herself almost was to be killed .. but she was shocked too, as to why he left her ??? will he come after her ??? Does he want to give her a painful death ??? By torturing her mentally .. so many quiz and no ans.. she cried the whole night.. then slept at the wee hrs ..

After that day, whenever she looked at him, she found him staring at her always .. but she tried to avoid looking at him at the very next sec.. and she was saved from him.. as he too never ever came in front of her ..

Despite of the fact, that what he was, and she was scared of him.. she still tried to find him in the crowd every single day.. and when she spotted him, she would sigh and move out from his sight .. she never asked him abt her brother .. as she knew, one he was dead and second, as he didn’t kill her so there’s no use of asking that .. she had realized pretty late that fact ..

One such day, she was coming back from college.. It was late evening .. The shops were closing and she was hurriedly going back to her home .. when she got trapped from 4 sides .. looking closely she saw the same vampire looking ppl.. who were approaching to her .. she tried to shout , when all of sudden she was pulled up and in blink of an eye she was in a lonely road in the darkness.. she tried to scream yet again.. but there was no one human present around her.. she put her hands over her mouth and started at the vampires in shock and fear ..

She tried to run from one side .. but that was immediately blocked by one vampire.. she was seeing her death in front of her .. as all four started to approach her with their dirty smiles from every side..

Vampire 1:- we got nice catch …

Vampire 2:- I will attack her first and then you all can have her blood ..

Vampire3:- No I am attacking first …

Vampire 4:- chill children, everyone will have equal blood .. such a silly human.. walking on the road at this time that too alone .. is always an easy catch.. He told that to vampire 1 ..who laughed ..

Geet:- Let me go.. plz..

But they kept coming closer to her ..She closed her eyes out of fear..and prayed for a miracle..then she kept moving back.. when all of sudden something dropped from up and pulled Geet from her waist.. Shocked at first, Geet instantly then was relaxed looking into Maan’s eyes .. Don’t know why but she now was sure that she will be saved now.. He was glaring them all in anger and he had his eyes fixed on them.. Not letting anyone near her more ..

Vampire 1:- Hey !! don’t interfere…

Maan:- she is with me .. and you can’t harm her..

Vampire 4:- Maan, we are family .. and she is mere human.. Actually stupid one .. she was roaming around at this time …

Maan:- you forgot .. we shouldn’t harm ppl frequently this sooner.. we will get caught ..

Vampire 3:- weren’t you the one, who was to drink her blood that night ???

Maan:- but I didn’t …

Vampire 4:- Is she that special ??? He smirked and without replying Maan flew away with her..taking Geet by surprise ..Geet hold his shirt tightly in fear of falling down.. and kept looking at him shocked .. He stopped just one street away from her house ..and they started to walk till her house.. she couldn’t stop but clear her doubts …

Geet:- where they your vampire family ??

Maan:- yes ..you should stop roaming around alone .. He looked straight .. clenching his fists to control, to not to pounce on her…

Geet:- They will kill me ?? why me ??? she was freaking out …

Maan:- Till you keep your promise.. No one will kill you.. I promise on that ..(He stopped at the entrance door and then looked at her) I can’t come every time, to help you .. so better don’t depend on me..

Geet nodded and He vanished once again taking long steps .. Geet went to her home and thought abt his last said words..

Precap:- Geet knowing abt Maan’s truth…
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MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER PART 2

cold 2 final

First of all.. many readers want this to be an FF but guys .. am extremely sorry for denying .. Am having exams .. right.. so can’t make this an FF… and besides, I don’t know how many of you have noticed .. that it wasn’t 1000 plus part but it was 1500 plus .. and every part would be 1500 and more…just coz of the length, this story is consisting of 5 parts else it would have been of 12 or so.. To be honest, I was feeling bad for ignoring that req for almost a year that’s why typed to-not-to-delay anymore..and I had typed this whole story two weeks ago, so any changes for this , aren’t gonna be good, neither for me (as am having exams) and nor for the concept itself(as I would have to change lots of things and drag the story unnecessarily) but yeah !! I will be considering the suggestions .. though not sure all will be accepted and added in the parts or not ..but for converting it as an FF ..very sorry but not possible.. Will try to make as many parts as possible depending upon the suggestions …

Part 2
Geet opened her eyes and saw her friends around her.. she smiled weakly and looked around for Him..but he was not there…

Dev:- you scared us … what happened Geet ???

Geet:- I.. I d…where is he ???

Meera:- who ??? Her friend’s looked at her in confusion..

Geet:- wo.. that guy .. who was holding me .. ??

Romeo:- Guy ??? come on Geet.. you were alone, when Meera saw you.. you were fainting and they hold you.. right guys ???

Dev:- yeah… we just saw you there.. and you were alone .. there wasn’t any guy near you..

Geet:- How can that be possible ??? He was there..

pinky:- whom are you talking abt Geet ???

Geet:- That dreamy guy…

Adi:- you mean Maan khurrana ??

Geet:- I don’t know his name .. but yeah..He is the one … He was here… holding me .. my mouth..

Pari:- oho !! Geet, you should stop dreaming .. He was with me .. and see still is beside me .. Geet looked at pari and beside her was Maan… His expressions unreadable .. and his eyes intently looking at her.. Giving Geet a shiver…

Geet(ST):- what is he ??? why I feel coldness surrounding me,when he touches me ??? or even is around me ?? Am sure he was there, with me, holding my mouth, glaring me .. and he just vanished ??? with none, seeing him??? How can that be possible ..Nobody is believing me that he was there with me a while back.. what to do ??? need to find out.. what is he ??

Maan(ST):- Darn !!! This girl has started suspecting me .. Need to be careful Maan.. control .. Maan control… silly girl doesn’t know.. I can read the thoughts of ppl… Don’t worry girl, you will find one day… abt me .. but that day will be the last day of your life … He smirked and kissing pari’s cheek , waved bye to her … left from there…

Geet avoided Maan as best as possible .. and, according to his strategy, Maan too avoided looking for her… pretended to not to notice her in the campus .. and He also maintained his distance with pari, but would meet her often on the road that was their little secret .. of course for his benefit ..and tonight he was going to kill her and quench his thirst ..with pari’s blood ..enough of torturing himself …

Geet was late today as it was her last day in the campus before she was to go on prep leaves .. so she went to hostel with her friends and now she was heading back to home ..It was late evening ..darkness sourrounded the streets and roads..she was crossing the lone street.. taking long steps .. as she was getting scared of the barking dogs .. she heard an scream.. A loud scream.. Geet gasped and stopped in her tracks .. she tried to avoid the scream and resume back her walking .. once again she heard a yell.. as if someone was crying for help …The helping and adventurous nature she had, made Geet to follow the sounds and whatever she saw just froze her legs on the spot…
someone was lying on the floor, probably a girl.. in the darkness of the night and a man was leaning on her body .. Her neck precisely .. Geet gasped and shouted ..

Geet:- Hey !! leave the person…what are you doing ??

The man turned his head to Geet and in the moonlight she saw the faces of 2 ppl there clearly ..
The girl lying on floor was, pari and the person, bending on her was Maan.. drinking her blood .. He looked like a real monster … His teeth having blood of pari and his eyes dark and icy cold with blood..

Clasping her own mouth .. Geet muffled her own cries and ran from there backwards… only to be coming face to face to the monster ..

Geet gasped and tried to shout, but he was quick ..Grabbing her waist, he shut her mouth with his one hand and took her off her feet.. And ran in the darkness of the night …

In split secs, he was in one room… away from the populations .. He left her and she struggled to breath.. Geet was too shocked to react ..she only registered one thing pari died .. she sat there looking at his eyes … Yes, Pari was her enemy ..a competitor .. but she never wanted her to die like that …then realizations hitting on her ..He killed her ??? He was drinking her blood ??? that means he ??? he was not a human??? But then he was a murderer.. or a vampire ???

suddenly she got scared … and his coldness towards her and everyone came in to her mind …She thought it was all in stories and in real life there was no any sign of vampires but the past encounters and the live scene in front of her scared her.. and made her believe in those stories … He glared at her … she flinched at the look.. crawling backwards.. but he was in front of her in a matter of a sec..

Geet:- who??? Who are you ???

Maan:- you are thinking right .. Am a vampire.. (Geet gasped) am a Cold Blooded Killer…I can read your mind ..and you know what , you are my next prey ..

Geet(still kept moving backwards):- No.. plz don’t.. Don’t kill me.. she hit the wall and he leaned on her face’s level…grabbing her hairs, he pulled her head towards him.. inhaling her scent..

Maan:- Umm.. you smell.. wow.. definitely.. you are the best prey I could have after so much wait..

Geet:- No.. let me go…she shouted and hit him, which were of no use..

Maan:- shh !! Don’t worry .. won’t kill you for few days .. As right now .. I have satiated my thirst, with that girl’s blood .. I will give you a slow , steady death.. A bite, for now .. to make you mine .. to mark you … to let my poison be inside you .. and when I kill you, you won’t get that much pain… He bend down on her neck to bite her ..

Geet:- plz no.. plz.. don’t do that… she said that and thought of her family ..Her mother.. Her father.. and Her missing brother.. she wanted to find him and give her parents happiness.. but Alas !! she was going to die, right at the moment .. she closed her eyes … Ready to be dead .. helpless in front of his hard grip on her ..but her shouts didn’t stop.. Irritating Maan…

Maan read her thoughts and stopped right before her neck pulse …the image of her brother came to his mind .. whom THEY killed .. once .. and now as an impact .. he too was a monster like him now …

Maan:- I will take you, to your brother..

Geet (opened her eyes in shock, he still was bending on her ):- what??? How do you know ??? where is he ???

Maan:- He too is a monster now …We had killed him…

Geet(was teary):- And that’s why you are killing me too???

Maan:- No.. I didn’t know that .. just as you had thought of your family right now .. I got to see his face.

Geet (was surprised):- How can you ???

Maan(smiled):- I can read minds …

Geet:- so when are you letting him come for us ???

Maan:-Lets have a deal… Give me yourself.. I will give you ,your brother ??? I can still have you dead even if you deny to this .. but then if you yourself will hand over to me I will make your death pleasurable … and free of any death pain.. plus you will get to see your brother..

Geet:- But..I don’t wanna die .. why me ???

Maan(smelt her) :- your blood is so good .. for me .. That attracts me …

Gee felt disgusted at his thoughts but then she could have got her brother back .. so she agreed … and the next moment , Maan claimed her .. Drank her blood and she was dead .. Immortal … like him…. But Was she really???

PRECAP:-Vampire 1:- we got nice catch …
Vampire 2:- I will attack her first and then you all can have her blood ..

One thing i wanna ask… Is it that scary ??? if it’s so,do let me know.. i will make it a less scary one.. and one thing i would like to tell.. Don’t search logics in this SS as Maan has got weird personality here as a vampire .. Rest i will try to give answers to your questions ..

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